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My name is Daniel, me and my friend Alexis went on a trip to Puerto Rico for vacation. Puerto Rico is located in the northeastern Caribbean, east of the Dominican Republic and west of the Virgin Islands; approximately 1,280 miles off the coast of Florida. First we went to the beautiful city of San Juan, which is the capital and largest municipality on Puerto Rico. It is also the oldest city in Puerto Rico as well as in the United States, and the second oldest European-established city in the Americas. As soon as we left the airport we bought tickets which cost us 5 dollars to take the metro system called the Tren Urbano to our hotel, the Ceiba Ocean Front Penthouse which was one of the best hotels in the town. It had a pool, a bar, a park, and it was next to a big mall. After putting our luggage in our rooms, we left the hotel and then took a train to San Juan and visited the Puerto Rico Arts Museum which owns the largest collection of contemporary art in Puerto Rico. After visiting th